Somewhere along the way in my development as a photographer, I
realized that the "rule of thirds" was not the magic bullet of success
I hoped it would be. Many other elements are involved in making a
successful image. One which I find seldom discussed, but fundamentally
critical is the concept of keeping the viewer's eye entertained within
the borders of the image. By this I mean, not letting the viewer's eye escape.
I want to address four different concepts which I think are key to
keeping the viewer's eye entertained, thereby keeping it from escaping
the image. This is not meant to be a conclusive list as much as just "points to ponder." The four areas of discussion will be:
- Blown Highlights & Blocked up Shadows
- Too Much Information
- Visual Balance & Rhythm
- Cropping & Subject/Border Intersection
I will be using my own images for discussion on each topic. So let's get started.
Blown highlights and Blocked up Shadows
The most common (and most easily correctible) way the viewer's eye will escape an image is through poor exposure which renders
parts of the image with no details. I'm talking about the pure whites and pure blacks you get when you blow the hightlights or underexpose the shadows. This applies to both color and B&W photgraphy. If these detailess spaces in the image are large enough, they become at best, minor distractions, but often are much worse. Why? This lack of detail means the eye has no visual information to hold
it's interest. Given enough dead space, the eye has a perfect escape route
right out of the image. Here's an image guilty on both counts:
Notice that your eye doesn't spend any time
exploring the dark shadows on the upper part of the walls. That's
because there is nothing to see, just blocked up shadows.
It only gets worse. The blown hightights
in the background not only provide no visual detail, they are so
bright, they are actually overpowering and distracting from the primary
subject of mother and child. REMEMBER THIS TRUTH: THE EYE IS ALWAYS
ATTRACTED TO THE BRIGHTEST PART OF THE IMAGE FIRST. This photo just
never had a chance.
One last, unforgivable sin of this image is
that the highlights provide an immediate escape route for the eye
right out the top border of the image. Whenver the blocked up shadows
or blown out highlights touch the edge of the image, the eye will use
these to escape the frame. No debate, no appeal, you lose, three
strikes, you're out, now go sit on the bench and think about what
you've done. (I'll write more about this in Part 4)
Anyway, who shot this horrible photo? (oh yeah, this is mine from Venice in 1993).
Don't believe me on this stuff yet? No problem, let's explore a similar, but properly exposed image:
So here, we are immediately drawn to the
brightest part of the image. (The photographer who made this was 12
years more mature than the one who shot the first image, so the
highlights aren't blown in this case.) After viewing the main
subject, our eye follows the line of the steps out to the border of the
image and then quickly bounces back to the main subject. The shadows have
just enough detail as to not be blocked out, but not enough to hold
interest for more than a fleeting second (you may need to click on the
image to see this in the larger version). The eye moves in a back and
forth pattern, but always returns to the subject. No Escape!
Let's look at a couple more images before leaving this discussion.
This is an image I made last fall in Florence that I really wanted to like.
I like the subject matter, the story, and the mood. But it just doesn't
make the cut. And if you've read this far, you know why. The eye
travels to the brightest part of the image first. Here that it is at
the crossroads in the distance. Now, that part of the image really has
nothing to do with the subject matter and is nothing but a huge distraction. I tried
to burn in the details, but couldn't fully recover them. I tried
cropping in from the left to get rid of that part of the image
altogether, but that leaves the photo unbalanced and does not provide
enough space for the cyclist to "ride" into the distance. So, poor
execution on my part keeps this image from being successful.
Here, I was a little more successful. I
used the concept of the eye moving first to the brightest part of the
image to my advantage. I was able to anticipate this man and dog
walking into the light emanating from the store window and timed my
shot so that they would be somewhat spotlighted in that space. I
choose a low-key exposure to keep details in the shadows while not allowing the
ornate buildings too much light as to detract from the subject. When
looking at this image, the eye goes first to the man & dog and then
explores the rest of the image briefly before returning to the man
& dog. This is caused almost exclusively because of the lighting
of the image. While this image is far from flawless, I think it
illustrates the point of this post.
Stayed tuned for Part 2, where we will address the issue of "Too Much Information."
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